Reflecting on my Second Draft
After talking to Paul, my supervisor, about my second draft, he gave me some notes to help strengthen my storyline as I felt it was not as impactful as it could be. Besides little points, the main changes were Adding in an element in the storyline were Colin messes with the clues, making the storyline less linear After this Colin can admit to his actions and have a moment of redemption, strengthening his character arc and making him a more genuine character Although this was only one different plot point, it will change the story dramatically, as different elements have to be changed throughout for continuity.