Reflecting on my Second Draft

 After talking to Paul, my supervisor, about my second draft, he gave me some notes to help strengthen my storyline as I felt it was not as impactful as it could be. 

Besides little points, the main changes were

• Adding in an element in the storyline were Colin messes with the clues, making the storyline less linear
• After this Colin can admit to his actions and have a moment of redemption, strengthening his character arc and making him a more genuine character

Although this was only one different plot point, it will change the story dramatically, as different elements have to be changed throughout for continuity.